Open Poetry #31 |
For My Dad |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I received a letter from my family in the states a couple of days ago, about my father. He is critically ill, and not expected to recover. At this time, my heart is sad, but I know he'd want me to remember the good and funny times we shared, and in turn to share them with my friends. So, Dad, this one is for you.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I saw you in my sleep last night Your hand held out, your smile so bright But you were out of reach for me to touch I woke up thinking just of you The things you showed me how to do And hope you know I love you very much... Though time has passed and many miles I’m still your girl, my Father’s child You’re with me in my thoughts and memories Like when your barber cut my hair I sat so proud up in that chair But I don’t think that Mother was too pleased! Remember, Dad, the little girl Who loved to spin with you and twirl? On roller skates, we danced like King and Queen You told me then how life’s a dance All full of rhythms, turns, and chance And someday I would find my special dream... It all worked out, the good, the bad I just wish I could tell you, Dad Your time is running out, and we both know That some things never need be said They’re deep within our hearts instead And kept forever, where our spirits go... My father’s child, yes, I am one Was born a daughter, not a son I’ll cherish every moment that we had It’s very hard, this letting go But in my heart I guess I know You’ll always be here with me ...Thank you, Dad... Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very sweetly written my well wishes are with you |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you so much, muted, and also for the hugs!! It's appreciated...~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunnyone A wonderful write, enjoyed the read very much. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a beautiful, touching write! May your Dad feel your love and not be in pain. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sunny, I am so sorry to hear that news about your dad, but this poem proves he will always be with you, wherever you go, in good times and bad. Heart hugs to you, sweet lady. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
My father’s child, yes, I am one Was born a daughter, not a son I’ll cherish every moment that we had It’s very hard, this letting go But in my heart I guess I know You’ll always be here with me This verse really made the tears flow - for so many reasons. My heart goes out to you Sunnyone. Prayers are on the wing for your dear father. hugs, Chris |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
You had a good life together and that echoes in your words Take care Dave |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
My prayers go out to you and your family. I so enjoyed this tribute to your father. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Your beautiful words flow so smoothly. I'm sorry because of what you are faced with. Grover. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, this is beautiful, so sad though, for the situation. I understand. Hugs Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How well I know this kind of poem and these feelings... Darlin' girl... you've done him proud. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny: A beautiful memory is what you will have and to hold close to your heart. It brought back many memories that I have tucked away of my Dad. Big hugs to you. Ariana |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello, my dear friends... I just wanted to say thank you so much for sharing this time with me, and for all of your love and support. You are each and every one so much appreciated, and I know my Dad will feel the love, too. I guess that when it comes right down to it, we all share the sorrow of losing, but if we can share with such good friends, somehow it makes it a bit easier. Thank you again...love from me to you...~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh hon...my heart is with you |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sunny I will keep you in prayers...such a heartfelt loving write.... ~~**~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - sorry to hear about this. A lovely write to cherish. How are you doing? BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful thoughts of your Dad...James |
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