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My Loss
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My Loss |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
I remember days by the lakeshore Your eyes reflecting the restless waves Haunted was I like never before Much do I try to remember of those days Only memories though, and little comfort Not your arms or their tight embrace And the further I get from it, The more lines fade from your face I am left grasping at the empty air And even that blows away On the cold wind now there When I think of those days My loss is written in tears suppressed And heard in every single song Even happiness can depress, Knowing you are forever gone |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 got a spare hankie?A beautifully written sad tune, I could hear a stifled sob. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You expressed your loss so incredibly well, that I am able to feel your pain and sadness... Loving, healing hugs, EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The lakeshore is a familiar place...it's ritual uncertainty and restless grace... Well placed. Great write. TD |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
My loss is written in tears suppressed And heard in every single song that's how I feel most days... nicely done M |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very sad, but softly spoken...very touching  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Only memories though, and little comfort Not your arms or their tight embrace And the further I get from it, The more lines fade from your face so sad the loss you write of~ and yet so well understood! |
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