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jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

0 posted 2004-03-15 02:29 PM

pricked

love sans thorns, is it
as sweet, pray tell me is the rose
naked as beautiful as this
long stemmed stance
so gracefully planted
before me?
one
petal
at a
time
her
love
letter
to
him
unfolds
passion’s
need
propels
and
tightens
his
grasp
the
bleeding
starts
with
first
prick

this was for a contest on another board, but wanted to share.....I write so little that when I do I better post

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

1 posted 2004-03-15 03:16 PM

Yanno....if you'd just come down here an spend one single night with me...you'd be Toeragged and pricked too!!!...Oh well, I can dream yanno?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-03-15 04:17 PM

Wonderful write and I love the presentation.
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

~ Kahlil Gibran

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2004-03-15 04:56 PM

lovely...

hus
M

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-03-15 05:10 PM

One of the things about here is the quality of the words

Dave

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-03-15 06:42 PM

very pretty

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2004-03-15 06:49 PM

Yes, please...
share, all the time...
even when the petals fall...

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2004-03-22 09:55 AM

This is lovely, my friend... your talents continue to multiply! *S*

But love without thorns/bleeding/pain? *S* Only in dreams... *S*

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

8 posted 2004-03-22 03:21 PM

thank you all, didn't realize I hadn't been back to give my thanks

and suthern, sigh...guess we can dream...if only....
love you lady

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

9 posted 2004-03-27 07:41 PM

This is very lovely.

(Read Toerags reply. A word of advice "watch out for the prick"

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

10 posted 2004-03-28 02:48 PM

Very cool, jb

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2004-03-28 05:47 PM

JellyGal~
For you to share something sooooo lovely with us is our delight~
Anytime dearest poetess ... anytime~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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