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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2004-03-15 01:09 AM



Arms outstretched
Face to the sky...

I'm ready

To go where demons
Dare not fly...

I'm ready

Lift me up beyond the stars...
Heal the wounds -
Erase the scars...

Wash me clean in purest springs
Skyclad...dancing
Angel sings

In voice of sweetest echo rings
Announcing humble
Gift in bring

For all I have and all I am
I offer to the IS that is

I pray, accept this offering...


I'm ready...



-Vicky L. Raynes



"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

© Copyright 2004 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-03-15 01:25 AM


Vicky -- B E A U T I F U L !
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2 posted 2004-03-15 01:31 AM


oh this is so beautiful....

in my mind im out there with you reaching for all that is...

I LOVED this!!

Nan
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3 posted 2004-03-15 08:13 AM


When you're ready... What is, IS... I expect you've been heard, m'friend...
Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-03-15 09:16 AM


Beautiful...exquisite Vicky!
Love ya lady~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2004-03-15 10:31 AM


Lift me up beyond the stars...
Heal the wounds -
Erase the scars...

Wash me clean in purest springs
Skyclad...dancing
Angel sings
=======================


well this just sings....
how lovely is this Vicky-girl...
what a wonderful spiritual write.
And I love this style on you...
MORE MORE.

I am sure of my reasons, embracing the seasons,
and the sacred simplicity of you at my side.

Vienna Teng


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6 posted 2004-03-15 11:00 AM


Vicky

I do believe you have given birth to wing!  Beautiful!  

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2004-03-15 12:23 PM


absolutely exhilerating like a breath of spring
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8 posted 2004-03-15 02:15 PM


Yes

What else do you say

Dave

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9 posted 2004-03-15 03:04 PM


Vicky...Tender and touching write. Enjoyed.

Someday you will fly on angel wings
Into forever
And all it brings

Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

jellybeans
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10 posted 2004-03-15 03:05 PM


oh my, this touches.....this is all that He asks from us...to be ready to meet Him when He calls......beautifully written
Dark Angel
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11 posted 2004-03-15 03:11 PM


Ahhh Vicky.. this is absolutely wonderful m'dear.

M

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Sunshine
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12 posted 2004-03-15 06:53 PM



Unconditional acceptance...from both sides.
Exceptionally fine write, my friend...

dgvarner
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13 posted 2004-03-28 04:18 PM


"To go where demons
dare not fly"

What a good feeling that must be, to be so ready to free oneself of the demons of this world...

wonderful write vick..enjoyed..

hugs, g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..."  B. Adams

Kahlil
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14 posted 2004-03-28 04:44 PM


Beautiful write....that sensation, that knowing of freedom.  ~K~
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