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Angora Whim
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Angora Whim |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Tenderly then intertwined in soft pursuit Around the bend in trail divine Devoid a silken parachute Dropped onto sigh, a bounce into the sun Around the whispers of deny Arrivals flipside once begun Yarn spun gathers ‘neath the trace A touch the senses lathers Its supple drape of lilac lace Most likely sheared in days revered Of mumbled complex threads appeared The kind of fabric so endeared Angora whim You wrapped my dreams within Copyright Kkh 3/14/04 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another beauty *smile* |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Elegant!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ You leave us with such delicate *sighs* ... this is sheer beauty~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
TD I liked the humour and I like the threads woven within very subtly I laughed as I read this with the meaning Dave |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
What a pleasure to read! Very pretty. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lots of wonderful metaphors... Good reading.... Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Most likely sheared in days revered Of mumbled complex threads appeared The kind of fabric so endeared Angora whim You wrapped my dreams within" beautiful set alone *s M |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Wow! This is so neat. I love it. Wonderful verse you have here ThisDiamond. The closing lines are so sweet...they brought a smile to my face. Bravo my friend. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
there is something just cozy and comforting in this write...so pleasant |
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