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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Some of my old stuff I put it away because I felt it wasn't good enough and then read it and found it interesting Dave ******************************************** Eyes dressing the body to modesty Learning to soul Tingling with your breath moving bells to ring Matching bells to your spirit Matching your movement to harmony Of discord in life Spiralling light cascading to confuse your mind and body To tell To hang To leave with your brain To soar, fall, and soar again Until words no longer matter And you say all |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Indeed, I find it not only interesting too, but also very profound. Silent communication is very accurate. Love, Margherita  |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Nice |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I too, have gone into old caches of my poetry and paintings and have been surprised to have found some merit in those that I had just disregarded! This poem was definitely worth being brought back into the light!  Love & Light, EA |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Margherita It seems so mystic, back to front, wrong way round and moving as it should. Grover Thank you Earth Angel I suppose we throw our mind portraying and writing images and afterwards in the hard light of another day, the images are still there but the fear of what they describe frightens. Dave |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Dave, This is enchanting. Glad you brought it out. Very well done. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad you posted this Dave short and so powerful! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
ThisDiamond TD - from someone of your quality that is nice It has everything wrong and still stays as an image that is right. Thanks dave passing shadows I still dont know whether it is powerfull, it hits sub levels and it is still a strange poem for me dave |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Enjoyed this very much Dave. Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I like it  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Dark Angel Many thanks Beauty of the world has I think many edges but luckily they can rub off each other Dave KoKo thank you Dave |
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