Open Poetry #31 |
Rain so Deep |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I wish It would rain so I could shelter you with my lips one breath of air as we dare to share lungs exchanging fluids engaged by our tongues vacant by our eyes filled with passion and promises of a chance at romance where we will cause night to fall asleep and engage in the kiss that melted the snow and made forever so deep |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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wow! whew! I like it! very sensual |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I cut the wrong words June Jahfari ([email protected]) on Friday, June 26, 1998, 11:03:01. wrote this I meant to cut the words I wrote and cut the wrong ones. I'm sorry about that. Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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now I'm confused where are the right words? |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I was working though old stuff. I often reply with words and I didn't have my glasses on. I meant to cut the reply and edit it, instead I cut the original words I had replied to and then reliased pretty quickly afterwards as I always check what gets posted that I had posted the original words and not the reply I wrote. I would not ever take the credit for words I didn't write and it mattered enough to me to immediately say I had and apologise. I then failed to edit the words I had originally written and screwed up the title on that. Dave |
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