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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Lovely, is a new moon to a man. Bending, shows panty lines, And anger in his wife's eyes * A pasture of new spring grass And beautiful wild flowers; Lays crushed by passing cattle. * Aroused in a dark back seat, A whispered "yes"; Policeman's flashlight * Curious and beautiful A young fox, red and chestnut; Desires skunk examination * end |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Note: Shiva is the Hindu God of destruction, and also a bestower of wisdom and peace...at once transcending and including all polarities of the mortal world...In these poems I have tried to mix both of those abilities..the first two lines show Shiva's side that is pleasant, and in the last, he steps in to cause what seems like pain, although in some he might be a savior from worse conditions caused by our actions. Thank you for reading.. _______ice ><> |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm smiling. T'would otherwise be known as a touch of serendipitous Murphy's law, yes? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice Good metaphors, enjoyed the write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
real cool  like it a lottt JWIII "It's great to be alive" |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) I believe that's just what's wrong with a lot of our world today. Polarities emerge and you just can't depend forever on someone or something to save you from the destruction, you have to take part! (sad sigh) I saw your comment to my upbeat sing-along, "All Glories To The Assembled Devotees" and that was kind of my intent; to overshadow the Shiva with the Krishna, and rid of the maya, the lakini, or whatever one likes to call it that creates disillusion of joy and content! I have begun to adopt the mantra into my being to bring accord to myself and many, as our hippy predecessors and Indians did! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, let us understand Shiva but not be held in her grasp, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ford, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Aroused in a dark back seat, A whispered "yes"; Policeman's flashlight brings back memories *s M |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ice, very interesting conceptual writing -- truly creative -- enjoyed immensely! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Sunshine "serendipitous Murphy's law".....yes it is... Thank you.. * See More Thank you.... * Dixie "cool" is a cool reply word Thank you * Wolf "Real cool" is even better.... Thank you * Noah... Always enjoy your replies, they boost the ego a few notches.. Thank you * NThoughts Same here, been there, done that as they say.... Thank you * iliana The concept of this form was thought up by a poet friend of mine...we exchange "Shivans" in a poetry chat room... Thank you |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Another wonderful write. :-) |
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