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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2004-03-12 08:20 PM

The candle is burning low on my tabletop
the curtain is softly moving in the gentle breeze
I would be content to hold you now
but I’m satisfied to remember
when we wandered down to the sea
mesmerized by the lull of the moon
and the heat of the sparks
that flew in the night
was like the rhythm of the sea
washing my body against yours
and I watched you
as you lay sleeping
your body entwined in some far away dream
I lay lost in the love that I felt
and if you knew how lonely my life has been
maybe
once again we would be drawn
to the rhythm of the sea
but as I wipe the tears on my sleeve
I can only grieve
for what might have been

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-03-12 09:00 PM

Beautiful work. Enjoyed much!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-03-12 10:22 PM

Deb...welcome home girl. We've missed you, and your lovely thoughts. It is so good to see you again...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-03-12 10:31 PM

Beautiful Deb...very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

~ Kahlil Gibran

Opoetry4me
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since 2002-10-11

Posts 126
Dixon, Ky USA

4 posted 2004-03-12 10:35 PM

This is absolutely beautiful! What else can I say.

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

5 posted 2004-03-13 05:09 AM

Very beautiful writing Deb...soft and gentle....

Thank you..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-03-13 05:18 AM

does one really ever know for sure what might have been?

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

7 posted 2004-03-13 09:39 AM

This is sad yet very warm....
Memories can indeed be bittersweet!!!
Enjoyed!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2004-03-13 09:45 AM

BloomingRose~
Oh ... oh ... the beauty of these thoughts ...

You lovely poetess, you~

This is a delicately penned beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2004-03-13 10:05 AM

this is a bittersweet beauty!!
imagery wrapped in emotion....
How lovely to read you again poetess Deb.

I am sure of my reasons, embracing the seasons,
and the sacred simplicity of you at my side.

Vienna Teng

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