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steavenr
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0 posted 2004-03-11 08:31 PM


crackled obelisk of fusioned time
leadened faces of opiate rhyme
slow-sweeping hands that feather life’s ciphers
nature-forced lips that ruminate whispers

serene in shadows and calm in force,
whittling shards of grain-fed coarse
drifting floes of transient days
unkempt by lines, soaked through by gaze

sun-kissed robes that outline the dial
silhouette rays to cast away guile
proffer the seamless context of being
and lessen the loss that occurs without seeing


© Copyright 2004 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2004-03-11 10:23 PM


I like this

thanks for the words

Dave

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2004-03-11 10:55 PM


kind of obscure but the message clear as day
BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2004-03-12 12:01 PM


sun-kissed robes that outline the dial
silhouette rays to cast away guile

A true poet, you are~

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-03-12 01:34 PM


astounding!
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5 posted 2004-03-12 02:46 PM


Beautiful, as always, steaven. I love
reading your poetry.  
Hugs  
Ethel

iliana
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6 posted 2004-03-15 01:04 AM


Amazing write -- you never cease to send my imagination reeling, Steavenr!
WildPoet
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7 posted 2004-03-16 03:46 AM


Very nice.

WildPoet

ethome
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8 posted 2004-03-16 03:56 AM


I enjoyed the read very much....Nicely done.

Eric

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