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the many faces of time
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the many faces of time |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
crackled obelisk of fusioned time leadened faces of opiate rhyme slow-sweeping hands that feather life’s ciphers nature-forced lips that ruminate whispers serene in shadows and calm in force, whittling shards of grain-fed coarse drifting floes of transient days unkempt by lines, soaked through by gaze sun-kissed robes that outline the dial silhouette rays to cast away guile proffer the seamless context of being and lessen the loss that occurs without seeing |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I like this thanks for the words Dave |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
kind of obscure but the message clear as day |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
sun-kissed robes that outline the dial silhouette rays to cast away guile A true poet, you are~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
astounding! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful, as always, steaven. I love reading your poetry.  Hugs  Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Amazing write -- you never cease to send my imagination reeling, Steavenr! |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
Very nice. WildPoet  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I enjoyed the read very much....Nicely done. Eric |
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