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Krishankins
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0 posted 2004-03-11 03:05 PM


Take me back to our hiding place
Where dreams come true and time erased
We can travel anywhere we chose
We've a flying carpet and magic shoes

Let's take a ride on Pegasus' wings
We'll listen to songs the angels sing
Drifting aloft in starry skies
It's amazing, this place I see in your eyes

Hearing your name is enough for me
It sends me there, it sets me free
I catch myself in mid-day, dreamin'
Of the life we're starting, not the one we're leavin'

For my bride-to-be, Emelda



If you're not yourself, then there is no you.

© Copyright 2004 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-11 03:08 PM


Ah Kris..this is so beautiful.
Your bride to be is one lucky lady!
~Smiles & Hugs to you both, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

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2 posted 2004-03-11 03:37 PM


I agree with my sister Enchantress - this is beautiful. hugs, Chris

For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul.
-- Judy Garland





    

Kristabell
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3 posted 2004-03-11 03:44 PM


Very sweet!
DavePage
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4 posted 2004-03-11 10:25 PM


Very rich in meaning

Dave

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5 posted 2004-03-11 10:28 PM


Beautiful dreams in this, and congrats to you and Emelda!

~sky

P.S. When's the wedding?

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

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6 posted 2004-03-12 02:40 AM


awww...you are so romantic! Best wishes to you both
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