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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
On the street, Me in my black midst swirling white; Off the bus, You in greens and yellows smiling still. The same smile Worn a happy departing night, The same eyes There waiting for emotion to fill. Gloom |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
"Me in my black midst swirling white; Off the bus, You in greens and yellows smiling still." beautiful contrasts!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Professor! I enjoyed this vignette! I can see it ever so clearly in my mind's eye.  Love & Light, EA |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Very nicely done PG!! If you're not yourself, then there is no you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
well done Proff. smiles are good things. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, Enjoyed the read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda sad |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You boomeranged me to 1970... where once... Ah. Very good, Professor. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
hmm. the imagery Juju |
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Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA |
 Very nice. |
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