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a walking time bomb (Twenty Words or Less)
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a walking time bomb (Twenty Words or Less) |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Just a walking time bomb that could explode in pain Any different from past? Only would self seep agony stain |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hey Sadelite...love this. Back to the top it goes. This has to be about me...lately I am a walking time bomb of pain. Well done dear friend. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know I can relate great piece! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Liked!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done.. So much can be said in fewer words. Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sadie, you put a lot into a few words. I like that. Wish I could do more of that.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very powerful. It should be different from the past ... we DO walk ahead and grow, but sometimes it just feels like we are stuck. Sigh ... Love, Margherita |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Thank you Everyone for your comments. When I wrote this, it was after I visited a surgeon. To say the least, I was rather down in the dumps. I'm going to be fine-just can't wait for it to be over- a little scared of recurrence beforehand though. I tried to write this from a more general point of view because I know that many are experiencing emotional pain. Be well. Sadie |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hope you feel better soon, Sadie. Good write. |
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