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Follow Me ( a revise with a purpose)
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Follow Me ( a revise with a purpose) |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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Ms. Maureen may remember her Mmoonchild days where a certain princess wrote "Follow Me"...well, I decided to revise it and post it to remind her (and all of you) where we can go when the crying hurts too much....  cause there's alot of pain going around...just wish i had arms big enough to embrace all of you  Follow Me --------- Dear child with gifted sight take my hand, please follow find in *wish* we'll take flight give no heed to sorrow In our dreams we hold control find solace in our sleeping no regrets and wings on souls a moments rest from weeping slowly as your light does wane soon darkness shall consume there is a place that knows no pain where Sun will nurture Moon all life in this universe is united deep within and every heart shares every verse that flows from poet to pen you'll always be in safe embrace of poetic friendship sublime inspirational hiding place lays right between the lines and when the night leaves you blue if worries dance 'round in your head dont forget these words *for you* ~close your eyes and dream instead~ |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Muted....what a realy loving poem...if anybody needs love from a poem they have got it here....hope that you can dream....very pleasant dreams.... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
muted A delight to read. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
muted Beautiful in every way! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are a blessing |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Such strong compassion and love, you share. You are a blessing....oh, sweet dreams' embrace...~P |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and every heart shares every verse that flows from poet to pen you'll always be in safe embrace of poetic friendship sublime inspirational hiding place lays right between the lines and when the night leaves you blue if worries dance 'round in your head dont forget these words *for you* ~close your eyes and dream instead~ Dawn...funny you should mention it because last week while on my other computer I happened upon one I wrote for you..but it is not on this one so I will have to reconnect the old and post it for you later. I miss the Moonchild and Pout Princess days thank you MM |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a compassionate and lovely piece this is, muted. You are a wonderful poet and most obviously a sweet soul. ...jo |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
How nicely this flows, how sweet the feel of it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 thanks you guys |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks for the inspiration .... let us all enjoy each sweet dream desination Hope |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
where Sun will nurture Moon all life in this universe is united deep within and every heart shares every verse that flows from poet to pen you'll always be in safe embrace of poetic friendship sublime inspirational hiding place lays right between the lines A pleasant way to end the day! Thank you for this kind gesture and wonderful poem. Sadie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
where Sun will nurture Moon all life in this universe is united deep within and every heart shares every verse that flows from poet to pen you'll always be in safe embrace of poetic friendship sublime inspirational hiding place lays right between the lines and when the night leaves you blue if worries dance 'round in your head dont forget these words *for you* ~close your eyes and dream instead~ Dawn, even though you posted this for Maureen, it really touched my heart, too. It's so true. Thanks for sharing it with us.  Hugs,  Ethel |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This is beautiful and so compassionate! "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I loved it. -Juju |
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