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muted
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0 posted 2004-03-06 09:59 AM



Ms. Maureen may remember her Mmoonchild days where a certain princess wrote "Follow Me"...well, I decided to revise it and post it to remind her (and all of you) where we can go when the crying hurts too much.... cause there's alot of pain going around...just wish i had arms big enough to embrace all of you

Follow Me
---------

Dear child with gifted sight
take my hand, please follow
find in *wish* we'll take flight
give no heed to sorrow
In our dreams we hold control
find solace in our sleeping
no regrets and wings on souls
a moments rest from weeping
slowly as your light does wane
soon darkness shall consume
there is a place that knows no pain
where Sun will nurture Moon
all life in this universe
is united deep within
and every heart shares every verse
that flows from poet to pen
you'll always be in safe embrace
of poetic friendship sublime
inspirational hiding place
lays right between the lines
and when the night leaves you blue
if worries dance 'round in your head
dont forget these words *for you*

~close your eyes and dream instead~

© Copyright 2004 Dawn van Krieken-Smith - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-06 10:04 AM


Muted....what a realy loving poem...if anybody needs love from a poem they have got it here....hope that you can dream....very pleasant dreams....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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2 posted 2004-03-06 10:18 AM


muted
A delight to read.

Martie
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3 posted 2004-03-06 10:25 AM


muted

Beautiful in every way!

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-03-06 01:13 PM


you are a blessing
choshi
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5 posted 2004-03-06 11:10 PM


Such strong compassion and love, you share.
You are a blessing....oh, sweet dreams' embrace...~P

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6 posted 2004-03-07 03:48 AM


and every heart shares every verse
that flows from poet to pen
you'll always be in safe embrace
of poetic friendship sublime
inspirational hiding place
lays right between the lines
and when the night leaves you blue
if worries dance 'round in your head
dont forget these words *for you*

~close your eyes and dream instead~

Dawn...funny you should mention it because last week while on my other computer I  happened upon one I wrote for you..but it is not on this one so I will have to reconnect the old and post it for you later.

I miss the Moonchild and Pout Princess days

thank you  
MM

iliana
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7 posted 2004-03-07 10:58 PM


What a compassionate and lovely piece this is, muted.  You are a wonderful poet and most obviously a sweet soul.   ...jo
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8 posted 2004-03-07 11:37 PM


How nicely this flows, how sweet the feel of it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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9 posted 2004-03-08 12:58 PM



thanks you guys

HopeS
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10 posted 2004-03-08 03:38 AM


Thanks for the inspiration .... let us all enjoy each sweet dream desination

Hope

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11 posted 2004-03-08 09:42 PM


where Sun will nurture Moon
all life in this universe
is united deep within
and every heart shares every verse
that flows from poet to pen
you'll always be in safe embrace
of poetic friendship sublime
inspirational hiding place
lays right between the lines

A pleasant way to end the day!  Thank you for this kind gesture and wonderful poem.
      
              Sadie

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12 posted 2004-03-11 04:39 PM


Lovely...James
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13 posted 2004-03-12 02:58 PM


there is a place that knows no pain
where Sun will nurture Moon
all life in this universe
is united deep within
and every heart shares every verse
that flows from poet to pen
you'll always be in safe embrace
of poetic friendship sublime
inspirational hiding place
lays right between the lines
and when the night leaves you blue
if worries dance 'round in your head
dont forget these words *for you*

~close your eyes and dream instead~


Dawn, even though you posted this for Maureen,
it really touched my heart, too. It's so true.
Thanks for sharing it with us.  
Hugs,  
Ethel



Susan Caldwell
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14 posted 2004-03-12 03:51 PM


This is beautiful and so compassionate!



"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

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In your dreams
15 posted 2004-03-12 09:36 PM


I loved it.



-Juju

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