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Open Poetry #31

A Bit at a Time

allamericanjoe
Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

0 posted 2004-03-10 11:03 PM

My love for you grows
Like a great kudzu vine
Unchecked by space
Unhindered by time

My mind never stops
The wheels ever turning
My heart and my soul
Are for you always yearning

The insecurity I feel
Is something quite new
I've bared my soul to none
As I've bared it to you

Everything that you say
Everything that you do
weighs on my mind
I don't know what to do

Are you still holding back
Do you still have reservation
Should I express myself more
Should I show my elation

It would help if I knew
what's going on in your mind
I don't expect all at once
Just a bit at a time

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2004-03-10 11:57 PM

Well, you got that right...hope it all works out!

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2004-03-11 12:20 PM

It's been a while since I've noticed your user name on the screen. I'm glad I saw this. Your writing conveyed feelings and questions that are known to many. I enjoyed your well written poem. It had a gentle flow to it. Thanks for posting.

Sadie

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