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I Wait |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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I Wait ~ Bye Sue ~ I spent years with dreams that never canme Still, I hung on to them all just the same With hopes that someday they would come true Today it seems they never will come into view It seems as though I am losing all my hope All of this time I have managed to cope Too many problems keep coming my way From me, they never seem to want to stay Sometimes I think I should just give up Because it seems like life is just too tough I continue to do all that I need to do While waiting for atleast one of them to come true I try to tell myself to hang on a little longer That there will come a day when life is much better 3-6-04 |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
It will Sue. Just hang in there and be happy you are able to greet spring. Who knows what the season will bring?  hugs, ChrisFor it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you are right, something better always does come along....but, patience is a virtue.  i hope you find the strength you need to carry through |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sue I felt many mixed emotions in your words but there was an element of strength there at the end. You have many friends here who will always be here for you. Never give up on love and hope. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I also feel your strength woven in among your words. You are one of the most determined people I have ever known, and I know that you won't ever give up on a dream. Some dreams take a lifetime. You have proven your will long before that. I'm glad to see your rhyming verses. Keep the pen moving! Love Liz |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Things will get better Sue... they always do...just you wait and see. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I know |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
mmmm had you read my thoughts? so well said, so well translated... I am still waiting too, and I´m sure better days will come Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (03-11-2004 06:27 AM).] |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
dreams do come true. they will all be worth the wait. nice write! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sweet Sue, I just want to give you a great big comforting hug and a shoulder to lean on. You have been through so much but you have always managed to keep your fighting spirit. I know how difficult life can be, my own path has been very trying, but I can honestly say, that the sun does shine when you least expect it. ~ May the sun come out and shine upon your glorious head!  Loving hugs, Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Sue, thank you for sharing your very touching, sad poem. There is the light of hope shining in the final lines and I would say "hold on". Trust, dear one. Universe is moving to arrange everything right for you. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Sigh~ I enjoyed the words. I like the staying power you have. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I don't know what to say to your heart-felt write, except that I'm here if you need me. And, here's a heart hug.....  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hoping you feel well soon, Sue, and I know how those problems keep coming up one after the other to try and wear us down hugs M |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Yanno, Sue, if you didn't keep that stupid fish around, I'll bet a lot more than cats would love ya! lol An interesting poem, and one I didn't expect from a positive person like you. I hope all is well. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
I know the feeling. Great write! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I had to find new dreams...James |
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