Open Poetry #31 |
Taken (When A Man Loves A Woman) |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
TAKEN (When A Man Loves A Woman) As she played her cello for me, I was taken by her grace, her skill, by her natural talent, and her radiant sensuality. Taken to a place where silky rivers flow and shiny moonbeams glow. My thoughts, my sensory, my feelings and my eyes, saturated in the throngs of pleasure, as if I were mesmerized. Taken to a land full of grace, the most beautiful place, where a man loves a woman. JamesLee March08 2004 |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good... love is where it's at! Grover. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Taken to a land full of grace, the most beautiful place, where a man loves a woman'' ~ oh yes indeed you write love so softly! ~~**~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
James, you have taken your readers to a "beautiful place" as well! ~ To love & romance! Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that indeed is a beautiful place |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
gotta map?? this is so pretty, wishing i were in that place |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
As always a splendid write Charisma |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* music touched your soul and transported you to a world of love...Beautiful... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you grover, greeneyes, Earth Angel, passing shadows, muted, Charisma and Startime for the wonderful responses...James |
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