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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-03-08 06:29 PM


TAKEN  (When A Man Loves A Woman)

As she played her cello for me,
I was taken by her grace, her
skill, by her natural talent,
and her radiant sensuality.

Taken to a place where
silky rivers flow and
shiny moonbeams glow.

My thoughts, my sensory,
my feelings and my eyes,
saturated in the throngs of pleasure,
as if I were mesmerized.

Taken to a land full of grace,
the most beautiful place,
where a man loves a woman.

JamesLee
March08
2004

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Grover
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1 posted 2004-03-08 06:33 PM


Very good... love is where it's at! Grover.
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2 posted 2004-03-09 10:00 PM


Taken to a land full of grace,
the most beautiful place,
where a man loves a woman''

~
oh yes indeed you write love so softly!

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2004-03-10 02:54 AM


James, you have taken your readers to a "beautiful place" as well!  

~ To love & romance!
  Linda

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-03-10 03:14 AM


that indeed is a beautiful place
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5 posted 2004-03-10 06:29 AM


gotta map??
this is so pretty, wishing i were in that place

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6 posted 2004-03-10 10:10 AM


As always a splendid write


Charisma

Startime55
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7 posted 2004-03-10 10:13 AM


*sigh* music touched your soul and transported you to a world of love...Beautiful...

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-03-11 04:33 PM


Thank you grover, greeneyes, Earth Angel, passing shadows, muted, Charisma and Startime for the wonderful responses...James
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