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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Waves Waves of memories wash my shore As I traverse the evermore Act like quicksand pulling me Returning waves back to the sea. My feet are washed the waters stream Are set upon a path of dream Sending me to where and why Weather rue or soothing sigh They rush my mind like seagulls fly That scream and cry and fill the sky That search for food with hungry looks I’ve felt the same while reading books. And so I search the rainbows path I’d rather that then hate and wrath I ride the revelry of love I much prefer the flying dove Do come with me if you wish It only takes a mental swish. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
yes, a lovely journey it would be.... this is uplifting  |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm swishing... swishing I am...  |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
It rhymed and flowed and told a coherent story. Enjoyed! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You know the way Sy. We'll follow you. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
me swishing too.....loves it! Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"And so I search the rainbows path I’d rather that then hate and wrath I ride the revelry of love I much prefer the flying dove Do come with me if you wish It only takes a mental swish." Clicking my heels together three times and wishing real hard! I'm on my way!! Wonderful morning write m'friend. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I can hear the seagulls now. Thanks for this trip to the shore. And now I must make my mental swish to work. Have a good day! ~K~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mornin', T-Man! "And so I search the rainbows path I’d rather that then hate and wrath I ride the revelry of love I much prefer the flying dove" ~ Amen to that, dear man! "Do come with me if you wish It only takes a mental swish."" ~ Oh, yes! I do so wish! ~ and I'm mentally swished and ready to join you!  Love you lots, my friend, EA |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
As one joins you on your flight they are caught up in the wonderful world your words paint...Absolutely Beautiful... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
muted Thank you, thank you. Nan Swishing and wishing, missed you.  Opeth What more could one ask. LOL scorpio Just follow the yellow brick road. Charisma Just get on the wishing line.  Nancy, Don't forget to bring some tea. Kahlil Just make a swish with the wishing broom. vandana Thank you dear. Earth Angel, You will be my number one helper. Startime55, Glad to have you with us. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'll wait for you on the suede sand ... we'll walk in the warm waves hand in hand. Theres no place other place, sky, sea or land ... as cool as strolling your beaches of understand.   Through the water ... through the rain ... to the soul of everything Wash my heart out on the stones ... and I'm almost gone. David Gray |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Nicely done!! Images abound, Seymour! If you're not yourself, then there is no you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I'll walk hand in hand with you any time. WWRS Krishankins Thank you so much for the nicely done. |
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