Open Poetry #31 |
The Raven |
Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
The Raven Once upon a midnite dreary, Walked an old man, tired and weary. A raven flew above his head. The raven saw the man was dead. And so away the raven sped Into the knight. This came to me in the shower. Should I maybe take more showers? Jaime It may be that with a devoted band of cavalry, I can go to Mexico. Jefferson Davis |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Laughing here, this one got me. Yes, take more showers especially if they generate such funny stuff. Way to go, amigo. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LOL, Jaime! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
This one "flew over my head." |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Soaking there within your shower, writing all the words of power, dreaming of the bird, did you know that you were dreaming? Did you think that you were scheming, as the waters sluiced all steaming, giving you the word? Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at Pilgrim's reply. |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Suddenly there came a clatter and the shower no longer mattered as the soap bar fell and shattered shattered on the bathroom floor. Quoth the raven....get the door. Running to the door I scurried Might be someone sick, I worried Should have thought before I hurried hurried hard to get the door Slipped and fell upon the floor. (someone elses turn now!) |
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