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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-03-07 08:00 AM



full moon kept me up all night
searching out my emotions
falling into a maze of love
which way do i choose ?
i thought my heart was whole
still finding it broken in pieces
a ghost town , snowed in again
the magic of an early morning eye
the drifts get deeper , and the ice
builds its city strong
running away then returning
a loop that seems astray
she awakens my soul ...to be alive
so free in mind
like a bird i fly
granting myself wishes in vain
the cold seeps down below as the warm rises
lunar waves in a sea of starlight
give way to the sun and the breaking of day
brushed aside home by the fire
floating away lost in desire

JWIII 3/7/04


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DavePage
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1 posted 2004-03-07 08:02 AM


very nice images, really nice

Dave

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2 posted 2004-03-07 09:57 AM


aujussy  
Enjoyed the read.

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3 posted 2004-03-07 10:00 AM


Great write..very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2004-03-07 10:11 AM


This brought forth a special knowing or resonance of feeling.
The peacefulness of snows that open the mind...connecting pieces of heart and soul

To one sparkling dream complete.

Very beautiful write.
TD

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5 posted 2004-03-07 08:29 PM


this feels comforting

nice piece

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6 posted 2004-03-07 09:08 PM


JWolf~

'lunar waves in a sea of starlight
give way to the sun and the breaking of day'


Ahhhhh, that sounds like REAL POETIC GOLD to me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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7 posted 2004-03-07 09:44 PM


Dave , i am glad you liked the images thanks for the positive feedback.
Seymour , happy you enjoyed this one thanks S.T.
Enchantress , the hug was much appreciated
hugs to you too : )
Diamonds , hello fello michigander ...your reply was super ,( To one sparkling dream complete) cool thanks .
And Marge ohh my your the sweetest , pure gold ,how kind of you , huglets to you too ...
BIG thanks guys and gals , you lifted my spirits with all these nice comments ,i will remember always
fellow pipster , James Wolf III (aujus)

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