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Open Poetry #31

Living [Tanka]

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-03-07 12:36 PM

Living;
this wide-awake dream called life
distant gull's cry-
as waves crash into foam,
memories too rise and fall.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-03-07 12:46 PM

Choshi -- what a brilliaint analogy! Loved this one!

.......jo

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

2 posted 2004-03-07 12:56 PM

Choshi -- what a brilliaint analogy! Loved this one!

Awww, Thank you so much Jo, and big

back ~P

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-03-07 03:37 AM

you KNOW

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2004-03-07 03:50 AM

Wonderful, Paul

M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-03-07 04:17 AM

Life's a beach

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

6 posted 2004-03-07 06:12 AM

you KNOW

Big

back....

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

7 posted 2004-03-07 06:15 AM

Wonderful, Paul

M

Thank you ~M, deep appreciation... ~P

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

8 posted 2004-03-07 06:17 AM

Life's a beach

In so many ways, Dixie...For me, beach images are strong,liquid and strike close to home....~P

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