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Martie
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0 posted 2004-03-05 09:17 PM



So Much Skin a Song

There is so much skin
that holds the fluid parts
within the whisper of internal seam
sometimes a scream
a sigh and whispered question why
do not cascade in waterfall to clarity
upon the sun baked pond
so deep so deep the troubles my heart keeps
yet sweet with bliss stained lullaby

There is so much skin
That holds the bones of old
Within the cry of breaking dream
Sometimes it seems
An echo bounced on answers sly
Does not repeat in current of eternity
Upon fabric printed time
So long so long the memories remained
Yet sweet and bliss stained lullaby

There is so much song
That begs in mind be taught
along with croon a feeling
danger fraught  
that sweet anticipation's swept
within this pale peach of skin
to sink to sink with whim of open gown
the fabric catch of dream
in lover's song
_____
a repost from before with thanks to River, for running through and Cpat for reminding me with his post /pip/Forum88/HTML/001993.html

© Copyright 2004 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-05 09:39 PM


Martie
A wonderful repost, this has a little magic in it.

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2 posted 2004-03-07 01:54 PM


this is just wonderful Martie - you do this oh so very well - Paul
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3 posted 2004-03-07 02:04 PM


Beautiful Martie - had not read this before...thankyou.  hugs, Chris

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4 posted 2004-03-07 02:10 PM


so glad you reposted this


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