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vandana
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0 posted 2004-03-05 05:25 PM



If you were to tell me
You were married all along
And the tune we sand together
Had become another song
If our paths were to diverge
Like our dreams now splits in two
Through an interrupted heart
I would go on loving you

If you tell me
If I were really married all along
And the tune we sand together
Had become another song
Yes, maybe,
I would be wrong
To go on loving you
I would go on loving you
Till the end.

If all my visions shattered
Like a vase that hit the ground
And my hopes evaporated
Like the crumpled heart I found
It would not have been for not
Though our plans had gone askew
For the rest of our lives
I would go on loving you...

Our plans won't fade away
And Iam sure our love will grow
Through all the years
And we won't yearn
We will still go on loving
Each other
We stay the same
I know
At night sometimes
I called out your name
And would go on dreaming
I would go on and on
Loving you
Forever

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2004-03-05 05:28 PM


LOVE THIS DUET!!!!!!!!!
into my library you go

Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2004-03-05 05:31 PM


a striking composition...

much enjoyed ...

regards
sudhir

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3 posted 2004-03-05 06:38 PM


Very nice indeed! hugs,Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

Startime55
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4 posted 2004-03-05 07:13 PM


Oh my gosh....I was so deeply touched by your words....*sigh*....love once given always keeps one loving the other person...thank you, so much for sharing this poem and giving me back some beautiful memories.....

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5 posted 2004-03-05 08:24 PM


Very nice duet, Vandana and Mark!  Encore!
You two work well as a team!
                    Sadelite

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6 posted 2004-03-05 08:34 PM


Beautiful harmony in this song...enjoyed!
Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2004-03-05 08:44 PM




(big angel group hug) Yay! Awwwwwwwww, this is such a gorgeous duet, sweet friends, this would make a wonderful song too that can be heard on light rock radio, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Mark and Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you both!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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8 posted 2004-03-05 10:30 PM


Vandana and Mark....
Such a beautiful blending of voices.
Thank you...
Hugs to you both.

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

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