Open Poetry #31 |
loon tune |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lone loon cries at night. So sadly pleading her plight. Love stolen in flight. And I cannot deny I heard your mournful cry of Love lost in the blink of an eye. I hereby offer this song into the dark midnight sky, where the heart of your Love does lie, wondering why he had to die and leave you to cry alone in the pouring rain. * May ripples of LOVE become waves of PEACE |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is heartwrenching, dear Kacy, in its deep melancholic beauty. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A beautiful heartfelt response to someone's cry you heard....Beautiful... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Margherita, thanks for reading and replying. Startime! such a treat to have a visit from you. Thank you, sweet lady. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun Beautiful write, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful heartfelt write Kacy... I could feel the ache in this piece. Hugs~
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very, very nice! Grover. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhKacy~ So very, very sincerely touching~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) God Bless You, dearest friend, I remember this post so well and am so happy you brought the flock soaring back, yay, I truly believe we are all interconnected as the emotions all us living things share is evidence, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Noah, though it has been rewritten a bit, (hopefully an improvement?) yes, this one was originally written posted for all those mates left behind after the 9/11 tragedy, as well as for the loon that lost her mate to a hunter's dream that same week. Thanks to all who read. Hope some day the world will hear and understand this cry of the loon. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I knew when I read the title I was going to like this one-and I do. Sensitive and lovely. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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