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Open Poetry #31

Rite Of Passage

~Willow~
New Member

since 2002-08-10

Posts 9

0 posted 2004-03-05 10:40 AM

I am an exhalation

a quiet pardoning of breath
reaching

blended

the deepest hues among
warm colors touching

contented

the secret of a tender
smile forming

inspirited

a heralder of earth's
new awakening

I am happy.

~Willow~

[This message has been edited by ~Willow~ (03-05-2004 11:43 AM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-03-05 11:49 AM

cool write, Willow
made me smile

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2004-03-05 11:51 AM

BRAVO!!! I love the way you wrote this...carried me to the end....well done.

~Willow~
New Member

since 2002-08-10

Posts 9

3 posted 2004-03-05 05:10 PM

Thank you Midnitesun and startime.

~Willow~

aujussy wolf

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since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

4 posted 2004-03-05 08:47 PM

reminds me of a yoga master

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-03-08 02:04 PM

A fragile poem.
Very nice, Willow.
Thank you.

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