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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-02-16 01:18 AM



Through the night sky , a smile in the stars
all  those pennies and wishes in the well
their reflections in the water...
seem to go deeper
as the minutes turn to days
and the dawn to dusk

A mystery cloud surrounds her ...
an certain enchanting sound to her voice
now taken under a spell
brought back to life from a long sleep
yet as i awake , she dissapears like a dream

          

2-2004 JDWII

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2004-02-16 01:26 AM


Through the night sky , a smile in the stars
all  those pennies and wishes in the well

hmmmmm, yes!

If this is any indication of a penny for your thoughts,
then I should like to leave my smile in the stars.  

~Poetically speaking~  
Thanks for this~

A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2004-02-16 01:33 AM


Only to come again when night calls and dreams come, does she appear making your dreams come to life~

~ARH
Love and Hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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3 posted 2004-02-16 04:07 AM


oh very sensual, and flowing...very nice

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-02-16 04:33 AM


maybe you'll find her one day soon
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5 posted 2004-02-16 01:39 PM


loved it all, but the first verse reminded me of how special pennies, and in desperation quarters, plopped into the fountain!  
   Nice write!
                 ~Sadelite~

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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-02-16 01:41 PM


Softly sensual...very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

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7 posted 2004-02-16 02:11 PM


Enjoyed much! Grover.
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8 posted 2004-03-08 02:15 PM


Thank you allll ...pipsters have such passion ...   a sacred place indeed
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