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aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

0 posted 2004-02-16 01:18 AM

Through the night sky , a smile in the stars
all those pennies and wishes in the well
their reflections in the water...
seem to go deeper
as the minutes turn to days
and the dawn to dusk

A mystery cloud surrounds her ...
an certain enchanting sound to her voice
now taken under a spell
brought back to life from a long sleep
yet as i awake , she dissapears like a dream

2-2004 JDWII

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2004-02-16 01:26 AM

Through the night sky , a smile in the stars
all  those pennies and wishes in the well

hmmmmm, yes!

If this is any indication of a penny for your thoughts,
then I should like to leave my smile in the stars.

~Poetically speaking~
Thanks for this~

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2004-02-16 01:33 AM

Only to come again when night calls and dreams come, does she appear making your dreams come to life~

~ARH

Love and Hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-02-16 04:07 AM

oh very sensual, and flowing...very nice

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-02-16 04:33 AM

maybe you'll find her one day soon

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

5 posted 2004-02-16 01:39 PM

loved it all, but the first verse reminded me of how special pennies, and in desperation quarters, plopped into the fountain!
   Nice write!
                 ~Sadelite~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-02-16 01:41 PM

Softly sensual...very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

7 posted 2004-02-16 02:11 PM

Enjoyed much! Grover.

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

8 posted 2004-03-08 02:15 PM

Thank you allll ...pipsters have such passion ... a sacred place indeed

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