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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
the gilded glistening glint of ice-shard infested realms doth pierce the soul with languid darts surreal and steals from night the glow-stained edges of star-filled clouds in imagination’s enchanted dreams and lends to beams that burden brightly the sun-drenched arrows of daylight dynasties, flowing brooks of rays that warm the soul and cheer the heart alone |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
really cool the way you arranged it on the page , adds to the impact ...great job on this writing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
made me smile |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and lends to beams that burden brightly the sun-drenched arrows of daylight dynasties, flowing brooks of rays that warm the soul and cheer the heart alone ~*~ Graphically detailed poetry is a challenge all in it's own. Now, please, create one that IS in the shape of an arrowhead... I would enjoy seeing that! Very nice! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love the presentation along with the good writing..... Eric |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"the sun-drenched arrows, of daylight dynasties" What a wonderful poem. Your choice of diction is incredible, everything seemed to flow perfectly. You are a very talented poet. Good write ^*~Kimberley~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
aujussy, Sunshine, and ethome: I fear I may not take any credit for the graphic nature of the poem. It just turned out that way. I had no design in mind, and I always preview in left margin and center view...just to see how it looks...I liked the way it looked centered...but thank you...sometimes the words themselves are far more intelligent than the scribe who pens them...sometimes they seem to have a life and will of their own passing...I am glad...one smile is worth and eternity of writing Kicking Kim...you are far too kind and I am certainly flattered...I do love words, though... PS Sunshine, I haven't forgotten your challenge on the design of the arrowhead...I will certainly try when I find the time |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Designed to warm the heart...Beautiful.. |
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