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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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liquidity gawd he begged for clarity dance for me spinning I am bass upright in his hands so capable dizzy with my eyes shut tight present not accounted for stumbling across the stage opening my eyes to see |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hey Karen! Where's your pic? Oh ya....I feel the bump and grind of this piece.  Well done my friend. hugs, Chris |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
oh..hee hee....silly me.....there you are. Must be medication time.  |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, sweet Serenity. You will always be able to hear the music and it will be sweet to the listening....very gentle smile to you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling  and dancing  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh...I LOVE this, Karen... and yes...I can SEE it too... smile... Love YOU, lady...  "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity A cello is better than a base fiddle. LOL  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I had a friend, (insert forgotten name here), that played the upright...Mmm Mmm, She'd walk that thing all OVER the stage...Just SPANKIN it! (uhm, I wanna say Violet..nah. Hair down to her ankles...She ran off with some Top Gun carrier pilot dude, moved to Guam.....Daisy? Nope. Maybe it WAS Violet) Oh well, This took me there, instantly! Eunice? Nah. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Damn! This is one I want to get up and dance to..a slow deliberate sensual dance right down in front of the footlights. Lady you sure can sing the blues! Love ya! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Smilin at ya KA  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Loved every string of it! Your talent overwhelms me, serenity! Sadie |
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LiquidMidnight Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 50 |
I loved this poem. First, it's a beautiful write; second, I'm a bassist (not upright though, electric. I would like to study double-bass eventually) so it has special meaning. Thank you for making me evening. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Jammin writing babe , the chello plays onward |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Bravissimo, yay! In the symphony every compotent is essential to the rhythm, yes, and you certainly took front row center here, yay, God Bless You, I love this performance, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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