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Timeless
New Member

since 2004-03-04

Posts 9

0 posted 2004-03-04 03:09 PM

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Racist Triumph

Forever in a far off land
Nothing grows here
Just the emptiness of life
Time seems to fade like dust
With the immortal sound of tears

As tears turn to fate
In which all our dreams are judged
Hope becomes impossible to choose
When the time comes knocking
I try, I am refused

My mind soon realises
That racist examples ignore me
Life becomes unbearable
When I’m reduced to death
No-one will here my cries

So as I drift further away
From sin and my touché
And darkness becomes light
Know this when I am gone
I reign victorious in courage

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-03-04 09:49 PM

powerful!

Welcome to Passions...

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2004-03-04 09:53 PM

I reign victorious in courage

Amazingly Powerful....I am stunned by the feelings projected in this poem...You indeed reign vitorious....BRAVO!!!!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2004-03-04 11:25 PM

no one wins this battle...that would be my usual reply

but not this time,
timeless, you shall win in the end

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2004-03-05 01:17 PM

(big angel hugs) Time will listen to you each step of the way and will answer back even when it feels like its procrastinating! (sigh) Time falls under no control, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Timeless
New Member

since 2004-03-04

Posts 9

5 posted 2004-03-05 08:57 PM

wow. Thank you for your kind words, i'm only 18, and feel like i'm really touching people with my words. thanks you all!!

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