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Mt Rowley Junior Member
since 2004-01-06
Posts 25United Kingdom |
winding Winding down from the days destraction I look into the bleak night My mind so heaviy burdend with itself I try to and try not to sleep To try would mean no distraction To try not would mean exhaustion I cannot win as I cannot decide which choice is or is not wrong I wind myself until im stuck Once wound i cannot wind down To try means to wind myself further There is an answer, everyday I wind myself up until i brake Everyay i am and so is the day Broken looking back on myself mere seconds ago i realise that i am a different person... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to passions... The image in your write conveyed the sprung spring...the overwound watch...the endless pacing of resistence in the soul. When I feel like this I become the river...flowing and the force clears the channels. You conveyed the feeling very well. ThisDiamond |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
welcome to the passion...h |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Welcome to Passions good write We've all been there michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Mt Rowley Junior Member
since 2004-01-06
Posts 25United Kingdom |
touches a little on insomnia but doesnt really express it fully |
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