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Open Poetry #31
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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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0 posted 2004-02-28 07:08 PM


Parting to allow air to move across a mist of vapour
Gentling nurturing fragments of thin ideas to swirl within a cloud
Peace within the moments of bright swirling bolts of colour
Aimlessly loosed to brighten a sky
With ideas vanishing above the wreckage
Of a peaceful moment
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froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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1 posted 2004-02-28 07:38 PM

Hi DavePage,
   I like this.
Short and sweet.

:-)
Copperbell
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2 posted 2004-02-28 07:44 PM

I like this too.
DavePage
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3 posted 2004-02-28 08:24 PM

Thanks

I've havent really for being away purposes had a chance to catch up but this one has been bugging me for days.

Dave
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