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Open Poetry #31

In My Thoughts

ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

0 posted 2004-03-04 03:05 PM

In my thoughts you always are
Even though sometimes we are far away
In my thoughts you have a place to always stay
I never thought of you as anything to me....it wasn't until that dream that I begin to see
I am going to be your wife one day, then from your arms I will never stray
You bring me so much happiness and peace in my hectic world
I am yours till the end of eternity
With you I always wish to be

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2004-03-04 06:07 PM

I like the idea, but it needs to be organized. If you fix the flow, it will be easier to read. (:
It was really good thoughts and happy poems are like a jewel, all some need is polish equipment and wooola hahahahahahah! its a master peice!

lots of love
-Juju

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-03-22 01:09 PM

Love is so beautifully expressed.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-03-22 02:42 PM

Paris

You can only control and dominate so many for so long

You can dominate a small amount for possibly for ever

As you control
You destroy
And most governments dont understand

that whipping someone produces less than optimal performance

allow yourself in love to dance a wire

and make that electric

Dave

ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

4 posted 2004-03-23 03:58 PM

Juju,

Thank you for your reply.  I can't think of how it would flow better though.  Any ideas?  Thanks for reading.

~Laura~

Grover,

Thank you for reading my "expression of love"  Take Care.

~Laura~

Dave,

It is definitely electric!  Thanks for reading.

~Laura~

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