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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-03-04 01:57 PM



Shadow Prince

    

Time will fly, swift now
Yesterday’s moments will melt
Geese shall put feathers to wing
I may hold to memories
Gazebo dreams, snow and fog

~*~

Photo, Courtesy, C D Jungel

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Startime55
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1 posted 2004-03-04 02:01 PM


*sigh* it is amazing how inspiring the fog can be. A beautiful vision your words have created.

Dark Angel
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2 posted 2004-03-04 02:56 PM


Ahhh the fog, holds so much magic....like this poem.

Wonderful Bella

Mxx

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

EternitysHorizon
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3 posted 2004-03-04 11:29 PM


Time in asking turns all those emotionally charged remeberances, releasing the sour ones to mere memories moments past- no unwanted emotions clinging

As Time Passes- Touch so gentle
One rare ever stops feel that elegant hand

"High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy."

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-03-05 03:35 AM


I may too
Goldenrose
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5 posted 2004-03-05 06:45 AM


Very good poem..on a suject many people do not cover..

Thank you...


Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Kicking Kim
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6 posted 2004-03-05 06:51 AM


"yesterdays moments will melt"
What a wonderful line.  I really enjoyed this one.  The tone was perfect...Ah the fog..
makes me bump into things!!!

Only kidding..

^*Kimberley*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

ethome
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7 posted 2004-03-05 07:44 AM


A lovely compilation of poetic feelings!
Beautiful graphice!

Eric

kayjay
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8 posted 2004-03-06 11:17 AM


Foggy morning, hot coffee, and introspection, a recipe for mental health.  Well done!  KJ
ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2004-03-07 04:08 PM


The fog in all it's wisdom, obscures only part and frames it new in the clearing.
Loved this.
TD

Margherita
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10 posted 2004-03-07 05:54 PM


Your words and the gazebo in the fog are truly inspiring ..... dreams, dreams, fairy tales, suspense before everything will be revealed.
So lovely.
Love and hugs. Margherita

Ericc
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11 posted 2004-03-07 06:35 PM


Perfect...on so many levels.

Eric

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