Open Poetry #31 |
Shadow Prince |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Shadow Prince Time will fly, swift now Yesterday’s moments will melt Geese shall put feathers to wing I may hold to memories Gazebo dreams, snow and fog ~*~ Photo, Courtesy, C D Jungel |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* it is amazing how inspiring the fog can be. A beautiful vision your words have created. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhh the fog, holds so much magic....like this poem. Wonderful Bella Mxx Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
Time in asking turns all those emotionally charged remeberances, releasing the sour ones to mere memories moments past- no unwanted emotions clinging As Time Passes- Touch so gentle One rare ever stops feel that elegant hand "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I may too |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very good poem..on a suject many people do not cover.. Thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"yesterdays moments will melt" What a wonderful line. I really enjoyed this one. The tone was perfect...Ah the fog.. makes me bump into things!!! Only kidding.. ^*Kimberley*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A lovely compilation of poetic feelings! Beautiful graphice! Eric |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Foggy morning, hot coffee, and introspection, a recipe for mental health. Well done! KJ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The fog in all it's wisdom, obscures only part and frames it new in the clearing. Loved this. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your words and the gazebo in the fog are truly inspiring ..... dreams, dreams, fairy tales, suspense before everything will be revealed. So lovely. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect...on so many levels. Eric |
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