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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2004-03-04 11:34 AM

the ragged demise
of love’s premise
has left many a heart
scraped and barren

yet come spring
the newly graduated
batch of fluttering guests
and hints of light yellow
break through grey

the embattled eyes
never fail to notice the spur
of new-found yearnings
being re-discovered

a carpet in its weave
in plentiful shades of green
and vibrant buds raise their heads
slow and trancelike
another blooming begins

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-03-04 11:37 AM

Sudhir
Well said good read.

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2004-03-04 11:38 AM

Romantically written...and filled with what a poet loves best about spring. I enjoyed the read.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2004-03-04 11:40 AM

Very lovely thoughts on the new beginnings.
Love, Margherita

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-03-04 02:01 PM

SudhirMyFriend~

Yes !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-03-04 02:26 PM

This is warming and welcome, Sudhir...

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2004-03-04 06:09 PM

Very well done...smoooooth

starshine24
New Member

since 2002-10-31

Posts 6

7 posted 2004-03-04 06:34 PM

Dunno why I like this, but I do... and the first stanza really rings true.

Beautiful words, ragged demise of love.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2004-03-04 06:49 PM

Absolutely lovely Sudi

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2004-03-04 07:25 PM

enjoyed

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

10 posted 2004-03-05 08:10 AM

Thanks a lot, my dear friends...

Regards
sudhir

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