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Open Poetry #31

dealing with choice

smalls
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since 2002-12-20

Posts 62

0 posted 2004-03-04 05:58 AM

Uncertain of face or number
As he looked through a puff of smoke
Yet somewhat satisfied that he was on flight
To continuing his streak.
Nothing was between but a single hand
Held with fear of what wasn’t.
You can raise says the dealer
As he winks to the waitress passing.
Another round for this here gentleman.
Determined to keep despair from his face
He folds in uncertainty.
So it goes he was dealt a face.
52 times he had a chance
A brief look at the thinness of separation.
You had it in your hands
If only you took that chance
Explains the dealer of fate
As he draws again.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-03-04 06:44 AM

Wow! A great write about choice.
Very insightful too.
Love, Margherita

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2004-03-04 07:51 PM

Wonderful.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2004-03-04 07:53 PM

If you don't play, you can't win or loose. I enjoyed this!

aujussy wolf

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since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

4 posted 2004-03-05 01:22 AM

a cool poem , i enjoyed this writing thanks for sharing your deal

smalls
Member

since 2002-12-20

Posts 62

5 posted 2004-03-05 02:38 AM

thank you... a face or number symbolizes something other than just a card

Please check out my poetry online
www.soakgame.net/mrlawrencesmalls

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

6 posted 2004-03-05 03:47 AM

yeah, neat write

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