Open Poetry #31 |
mourning's blight |
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
shaded hues of ambered glow on sunset’s fleece tether the chords of sun-faint wisps to rain drenched dawn while sparkled jewels of dew-glint gems drape their droplets of pallored nectar spent and ease the flow of night to mourn lest daybreak come and not recount the number of the days when mourning’s blight decays the morning night and spheres of light illumed, pierce through the robes of gray [This message has been edited by steavenr (03-03-2004 11:56 PM).] |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this painted a very spectacular scene, very well described... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
this painted itself across the blue, a mourning hue that somehow manages to glow warmly |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
and spheres of light illumed, pierce through the skies of gray Thereyougo! Nice writing steavenr~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Gee, I wish I were a painter -- I would try this one! Your descriptions were really lovely, Steavenr! ....jo |
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