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Mt Rowley
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since 2004-01-06
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0 posted 2004-03-03 04:38 PM



the ultimate machine

They exist with such symetry and perfection
No thought just action
perfect little machines
short lived lives, to survive and procreate

Feeling somewhat envious
Life by sensory input alone,
an automated existance
no comprehension of what is behond

Mimicry a wonder which has no boundry
As perfect as their existance
Colour, shape shade
from plant, animal to surroundings

i try to capture this in my room
A small attempt to be part of this perfection
ever longing for the simplicity
of these biological machines

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-03-03 05:13 PM


a terrarium or aquarium fantasy
a miniature cosmos
enjoyed the view

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-03-03 05:32 PM


Midnitesun, thanks for the hint... I would've never guessed an aquarium. Clever. BTW existance = existence. Grover.
Jessie Carstein
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since 2004-01-08
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3 posted 2004-04-07 04:22 PM


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