»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #31
»
Fly Away
| Open Poetry #31 |
|
Fly Away |
|
|
Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Fly away on distant memories of dreams. Silken shades of sun tantalise my eyes, awakening my dullened senses. ~~~-*-~~~ Rain trespasses upon my flesh higher..floating freely at the forefront of imagination. A spectrum of colour swirling like a vortex of rainbows paints my black and white soul. ~~~-*-~~~ Beneath the crisp breeze of the wanting wind lies the ominous world which I have chosen to forget. "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
||
| © Copyright 2004 Kimberley Mason - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the crisp breeze of the wanting wind love that line... *s M |
||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
life is full of choices and yours are a complete painting of nature's brilliance. |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's okay to choose to forget sometimes ...rain trespassing...I like that idea |
||
|
Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
so many great images here and things to ponder - loved your poem - Paul |
||
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed the write, the imagery of trespassing rain (but perhaps dulled rather than dullened?) |
||
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Rain trespasses upon my flesh Love this line! Enjoyed it all. Chris  "At one glance |
||
|
muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
the words so vividly lead me through, and leave me with a sense of sadness, but a beautiful way to get there.... |
||
|
Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
kicking kim, I understand why you may have chosen this pen name. I have been curious, as it is so unique! I'm guessing it is because you fight to remain optimistic when things around may not necessarily lend themselves to optimism. I liked how you expressed your ideas and feelings in this very much. Take care. Sadie |
||
|
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kicking Kim -- Enjoyed this wistful write and thought that "A spectrum of colour swirling like a vortex of rainbows paints my black and white soul" was really particularly wel written. |
||
|
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nicely written...fully of vivid imagery and an exceptional choice of words |
||
|
Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Thankyou all again for taking the time to read my thoughts. ^*-*^*-*^*-*^*-*^*-*^ Midnitesun, you are so right *dulled is better than dullened, I may amend this in time, but I'll leave it for now or nobody will understand this message!! ^*-*^*-*^*-*^*-*^*-*^ Thankyou all again! ^*Kimberley*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kimberley~ What a precious penning~ There is a soft flow to your thoughts~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
