Open Poetry #31 |
Peace? |
LukeatNFFC Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 42Nottingham, England |
Peace? Safety in arms, Fear in silence, Anger in calm, Peace through violence. Nothing now the way it seems, Until, by greater power, It can be deemed, We’re safe, Although we’ll never be, Delighted by constant legend, A word, ‘Free,’ Is it something we can hope to see? Peace? Doubtless to say, alas, no, We’re not safe, Contrary to belief, We’re alone, Each to his self, In death, We have our only solstice. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Succinct and cynical. I like it. It's a grand ideal trapped in the mind and heart... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done and much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
I liked this,yeah,not even any certainty that theres peace in death but you right ain't none of us leaving here alive..enjoyed. Live like it's your last day... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Serious. Delivered with sincerity and reverence. Very good! Grover. |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
"In death,We have our only solstice." such strong lines. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This speaks some dark truths, dearest friend, I happen to think it can be a three-way street and can work if only everyone engages for peace, then we can all leave purgatory dead but lively! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Luke, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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