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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2004-01-27 09:57 AM

How Does One Progress

The heart becomes fragile
Old love songs are played
How does one progress
As yesterdays smiles fade

Why do I constantly rewind
Allowing my mind to replay
How does one progress
From feelings of yesterday

This continued reminiscing
About those days gone by
How does one progress
For without him I cannot fly

I linger upon the memories
To which he played a part
How does one progress
Until I mend a broken heart

Hope©2004

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-01-27 10:13 AM

HopeS
On the wings of time, enjoyed.

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2004-01-27 10:28 AM

hey thanks Seymour , yes I guess time does heal

Hope

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-01-27 10:32 AM

I linger upon the memories
To which he played a part
How does one progress
Until I mend a broken heart

Hello, Hope

This is sad, yet beautiful.
Thanks for sharing.

Hugs

Ehtel

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2004-01-27 10:38 AM

Thank you Ethel for your kind comment in replying .... yes he does bring out a mixture of emotions in me

Hope

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-01-27 12:30 PM

damn good question

you know I know what you feel

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

6 posted 2004-01-27 12:34 PM

It happens in time....nice questions.

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2004-01-27 01:55 PM

Time is of course the only healer. Nicely done Hope.

~ Blessed Be ~

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

8 posted 2004-01-27 02:12 PM

A very touching poem. Sad, yet very artistic. The use of recording related words depicts the replay of memories. Not depressing at all-- more so, comforting.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2004-01-27 03:43 PM

(big angel hugs) Oh Hope, I know just how you feel but believe you have the strength in your heart as you are bound to find so many new promises out there, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Ravenwolfvoyager
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since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

10 posted 2004-01-27 07:09 PM

Through wonderful writes such as these Hope. You write extaordinary and love through the ink that you spill. Thank you Hope. I felt every line.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2004-01-27 11:38 PM

Nice writing...usually anger takes me to another level...James

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