Open Poetry #31 |
Sunrise |
scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sunrise As morning dawns Come kiss me. While dew drops glisten Come let me hold you. As day begins Let us start...again. believe in what your heart feels... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, yes... *S* I love this! *S* |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Each new day is like a fresh page, to be written on, and kept in mind for future reflection! lovely read. ^*Kimberley*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Desire at its finest! lovely way to start any day.... ~~**~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Always a reason to start a day fresh... smiling at this, Scorpio, thank you! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
As morning dawns Beautiful! Vivid! heartfelt! Inspiring!
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Extremely positive....wonderful write |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful words of love Scorpio.. Thank you for the inspire. When the sun sets this evening Please come kiss me ~ As the stars fill the heavens Will you hold me? ~ And as this day ends.. Yes, let us love....again.
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ummm...yes..what my sister said! Well done! Chris "At one glance |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Suthern. Glad you liked it. Kim, I appreciate your support. Thanks. And desire is a good thing, Lauren. Thank you. Karilea, one of the best reasons and ways to start any day. Thank you. Lee, thank you for your positive remarks. Glad this provided some inspiration to you, Paul. Thank you for stopping in. Sweet tinker. I'm honoured that this simple write would inspire such a beautiful response from you. Thank you!! Thank you Chris. Most kind of you to comment. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Scorpio~ Soooooooo delicately soft~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Scorpio -- I like the way you laid this out, giving it a very nice flow -- just lovely! .......jo |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
softly sexy |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a beautiful write! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you,Marge. Soft does work best. Iliana, thank your your comment. I'm glad you liked this. Muted, thank you for your support. I appreciate your reply. Thank you Midnightsun. Your support is very much appreciated. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The perfect new beginning. Uplifting and beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Margherita. Your kind words were appreciated. believe in what your heart feels... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
"Glad this provided some inspiration to you, Paul. Thank you for stopping in." Oh yes, ~S your poem certainly did inspire...I thank you...~P |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
That this humble write would inspire you indeed pleases me, Paul. believe in what your heart feels... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Vandana. Much appreciate your support. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
scorpio What a great way to look at time! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Martie, yes it is a great way to spend time too. Thank you. believe in what your heart feels... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
what a remarkable commemoration of hope...very nice |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Sweet writing |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
if i could wake this way every morning...i would get up to the alarm instead of hitting the snooze button...beautiful...just beautiful...helen |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is precious |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you James. Your kind support is appreciated. Steven, I'm glad you liked this. I appreciate your comments Aujussy Wolf. Thank you. Helen, who needs an alarm clock?? Thank you. Very kind of you to say so, Passing Shadows. Much appreciated. believe in what your heart feels... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
"That this humble write would inspire you indeed pleases me, Paul." Well then, ~S, that makes two of us.... ~P |
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