Open Poetry #31 |
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Fireflies (Cinquain) |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Fireflies Festive fliers Floating o’erhead alight Youthful night-presence summons delights, Inflamed |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Steaven~ Only fair that this little critter - should show up for your adorable Cinquain~ ![]() Love it~ ![]() *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hi Steaven This was a great piece of writing. We don't have fireflies here in Australia but I have always found they fascinating. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nice...can't wait 'til summer so I can see them again. Hugs~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Marge, thanks for the little bugger...the topic was chosen more out of an assignment than an inspiration Sue, sorry that you do not have them there...one of the most beautiful sights on a clear summer night is the harvest lightshow of these fascinating little creatures |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Enjoyed this one so much...Macy goes crazy over those little creatures, always wanting me to catch them for her. Now you really got me longing for summer and what lies in another season. Patricia |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Enchantress, the only thing that can warm you in this deep freeze are thoughts of summer...and what better to think of than fireflies Pat, thanks for reading, but this ice is just soooooo coooooold. Say hi to Macy for me. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Those fireflies are such a natural wonder. I hope someday I can be in a place, where I can see them often. Thanks for this Steven. I really enjoyed it! Richy |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, I love fireflies and as a little boy I always went around chasing them and putting them in a jar, but only temporarily so they can be free, yay! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is glowing with smiles, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Steaven, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Steaven, I see that you did a cinquan....and very, very well, too. I like fireflies, too. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat! |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
steavenr... They are some of my favorite creatures...thank you for capturing their essence so succinctly! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Makes me think of summer....very pretty! ![]() ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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