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Crayons (optimistic version)
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Crayons (optimistic version) |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Peeling back the wrappers of sea green, magenta, cornflower, tangerine; Sharpening old crayons, attempts to freshen days seen. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Nice imagery! Grover. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Colors were given wondrous names, weren't they, Sadie? Outside of a child... what other thing would you most like to be responsible for naming? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very nice way to describe an excursion into the past. Love, Margherita  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadelite That's one way to say it. Enjoyed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
crayers painting the day...wonderful write |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
perhaps stumbling to barely used colored more acceptable that thought and the option of fastening the stubs to a rainbow foray mass sounds fun crayons populcae demands a vote crayons for everyone "Quit stealing my blues" might turn into mayhem and melee but the value of a crayon can hardly be gauged by we mortal few Well done "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel happy dance) Awwwwwwww, I love happy endings and this one made me smile, sweet friend, when skies seem gray, just draw away with the brightest shades, yay! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sadelite, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I like this one even more!  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Grover, It was so nice of you to comment. Thanking you, Sadie Sunshine, Well taken! What other than a child's name would we be most responsible for naming? I enjoyed your comment. Sadie Margherita, What a sweet comment. Thank you, Margherita. Have a nice day. Sadie Seymour, Thanks for reading this little one, Seymour. I'm glad you enjoyed. Sadie Lee J., You have a great command of our language and vocabulary. I feel flattered by your comment. Sadie Eternitys Horizon, I think I enjoy reading your poetic comments more than I enjoy writing. There is always mystery in your response and I have to reread a few times before I understand. I really like the way you chose to picture crayons... Sadie Noah, Hearing a response from you about a poem is always a happy ending. Thank you. Sadie iliana, I wrote this one first, but figured I'd change my crayon perspective. I love doing flipsides. Sadie |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you took me back to a time of colors that were always torn back and dull if they weren't broken - I got lost in that time for a while - Paul |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Awesome! TD |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
And remember how they smelled? And what a thrill it was to open a new box?? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed this colorful write seafoam green and ultramarine blue were always two of my faves and tangerine tasted good  |
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