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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-03-01 08:54 AM


Never ending whirl.
Emotional commotion,
its too turbulent.

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

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HopeS
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1 posted 2004-03-01 08:59 AM


Yes the ups and downs .... the ins and outs
I can relate , I am thereabouts ... enough commotion emotion to fill an ocean , you expressed the feeling excellently in so few words

Hope

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2 posted 2004-03-01 09:09 AM



Honey, I keep telling you...
you've got to watch that
merry-go-round.  

Very good!

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-03-01 09:17 AM


Excellent Donna...
I know this dizzy feeling...
~Hugs and love ya lady~


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~
            

Kahlil
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4 posted 2004-03-01 09:32 AM


"I find it hard to tell you,
I find it hard to take.
When people run in circles its a very very
mad world."   - Gary Jules
~K~

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2004-03-01 09:47 AM


Merry go round NOT, more like roller coaster...
and I HATE roller coasters.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-03-01 12:51 PM


I hear ya!
EternitysHorizon
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7 posted 2004-03-02 12:41 PM


emotional commotion
has a very distinctive sound
I like that

iliana
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8 posted 2004-03-02 01:40 AM


Good analogy!  That surely holds true for me this week!
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9 posted 2004-03-02 10:56 PM




(big angel hugs) I understand this nauseating feeling, sweet friend, as a little boy I was a wimp at so many rides as I was scared by going upside-down for instance, but ever since I've escaped depression I've been enjoying the ride! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2004-03-05 08:35 AM


roller coasters are fun, but NOT if they won't stop and let ya off!!  lol  
Thanks, you are all so appreciated.

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