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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2004-03-01 06:02 AM

Forever Fades Too Soon

Hearts had played happily
Those strings in harmony
Until one notices a fading
Pondering notes wistfully

Our heartstrings in accord
How together used to be
As forever begins to end
Into just a fading memory

Entwined into loving duets
Words matching the tune
One lonely heart lingered
As forever fades too soon

Where words are retained
Of what once used to be
A heart in solitary confine
Still dwelling on a memory

As the dreams gather dust
Within the changes I view
For the heart without tune
Writes words wistfully blue

Hope©2004

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-03-01 09:52 AM

Hope~

'How together used to be'

There have been times in my life that I've known this aftering~

Sending *hugs*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2004-03-01 10:07 AM

Thank you Marge ... your hugs are always comforting

Hope

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2004-03-01 10:55 AM

Hope, this is perfect, I feel the emotion. I especially like the last stanza.
Sandra

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2004-03-01 10:59 AM

Hey thank you Sandra in your kind , caring reply

Hope

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-03-01 12:44 PM

nodding in agreement

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-03-01 05:46 PM

Yes it does...James

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

7 posted 2004-03-01 06:06 PM

To soon indeed.

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2004-03-02 11:39 PM

this last stanza:

"As the dreams gather dust
Within the changes I view
For the heart without tune
Writes words wistfully blue"

is an excellent ending to an exquisite write

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2004-03-03 09:50 AM

Dear Hope, this is so very beautiful in content and form. It touches my heart for the melancholy it expresses.
I just saw an advertising for an Italian movie called “L’amore è eterno finché dura” (Love is eternal as long as it lasts)!
Love and hugs.
Margherita

Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

10 posted 2004-03-03 09:56 AM

"Entwined in loving duets"..
..This sounds like how love ought to be. Another lovely read. Your heart shines through so brightly in these poems.

*hugs*

^*Kimberley*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

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