Open Poetry #31 |
impossible gateways [another one for dreamers] |
lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
somewhere upon my misty sea before awakened dawn I try to peek in gateways to things I’ve dreamed beyond stumblin’ o’er the obstacles who rise up with out theme forming echoes endless in the halls of places I have been in hues of muted blushing I’ve wandered all the night where emerald fades to ochery and morning beckons light but in my flinch of wakening and stumbling through my head I’ve come to find the wishes and dreams I’ve left in bed are scattered o’er the woodlands and far beyond the crest and found throughout the nexus on gateways lichened rest Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... ~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"somewhere upon my misty sea before awakened dawn I try to peek in gateways to things I’ve dreamed beyond stumblin’ o’er the obstacles who rise up with" Dale...I do this too. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
thanks for sharing this poem ...sometimes they hit home ...great write jw |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
Some say "Roads Impassable" to which I reply Who braved to carve the way where none ventured afore that a road exists at all lichened over but once upon a time... "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
in awe of how you do this! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ OH WOW !!!! Impressed ALWAYS by the lovely way you let your thoughts flow down the page~ Word-Art at it's finest~ Such a treat from such a talent~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
your words have such deep artistry even without the inventive format.... you leave me in awe almost every time. |
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