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Escapade |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Expectation Lighting dark electric emotions lighting Desire Movement Slowing raising expectation Lighting Waves Asking 2 and 4 pence To dance Along an escapade That dances the brain Climbing To Uncomitted promises Extorted On a bed Of roses |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You painted quite a dimensional piece, Dave -- loved the lines: Uncomitted promises Extorted" |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good, Dave!  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Grover, iliana Odd bits of memory and words still keep erupting as I once again explore unfinished business, the torn away bridges of communication where we stand on oppostite sides of a river bank, arguing about who said we meant to go to a dance rather than advance and tore the bridge down in temper. Thanks Dave |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Dave, It's a shame bridges are burned in temper or stubborness. I'm glad you clarified the poem in a response. I understood it before, but now, it is more completely visualized. Incidently, thanks for posting at one of my poems. Speaking of bridges... I believe I may have misunderstood your response and written mine inappropriately. I enjoy your poems. I don't always understand the depth, but there is always something that I take with me. Sadelite |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write...I understand it well |
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