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The Abyss |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The abyss And those that pass into the dark Out the candles of their ark For silence stands a metaphor And guards before the entrance door And non-can pass the border line Before the ticket has been signed For time will punch it when it’s due And you will pass into renew Of this there’s some authority Upon the books reality We know that all will funnel back For change arranges all the flack And you will be of all that’s new Pass again into review And some will say they are above The common ordinary dove Yet all of us are but a part Of every new of every start |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
And those that pass into the dark Out the candles of their ark For silence stands a metaphor And guards before the entrance door Those lines are just way cool Sey. _____________________________________ and then this: Yet all of us are but a part Of every new of every start this...wraps it up all perfectly with wisdom! Good morning sir, I do enjoy reading your words each morning. Sort of starts they day off just right...  It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very well wriiten poem Seymour.. Thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I agree with Gentle spirit. Way cool! Deb |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Couldn't agree with you more sir...as life's rhyme for each and every person, is predestined and intimatly personal. As always, wonderful to read you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 ...I'm coming back as a cat...or a horse. One or the other... I'll either be beautiful or self-sufficent. LOL... Thank you Sy. I truly enjoyed this view today. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine And you will continue to shine.  LeeJ As always a pleasure to have you read me. BloomingRose Thank you for the cool. Goldenrose That is a golden answer. Gentle Spirit Couldn't ask for anything more than starting your day off just right. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And you will pass into renew Yet all of us are but a part Of every new of every start You are beautifully aware of change, of renew, of motion and of oneness with All there is. Very deep, dear Seymour. Love and light. Margherita  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita It's always good to take a peep in the deep. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Sy guy! You amaze me with your early morning write. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, And I'll be there for both. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
An inspirational gift from you this morning Sy. Much appreciated and enjoyed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio My pleasure thank you sir. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"Yet all of us are but a part Of every new of every start" How true. Thanks for the lovely reminder. ~K~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kahlil You welcome my friend. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
... but dear Mr. T., you ARE "above the common dove"...  You fly with the angels and are a part of all blessed alphas and omegas!  EA |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
So many layers of meaning here... and I quite agree with your perspective. Of course I would prefer my "renew" now rather than after my ticket is punched... Thanks for giving me something to meditate on...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You're acting just like an Angel. LOL sea_of_okc You welcome and thank you for the kind reply. Passing, Sigh back |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Truly, excellent work! Grover. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Grover. |
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