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Watching....Waiting...
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Watching....Waiting... |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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In winters wilderness snow glows blue from moonlight stream. My wolf eyes burning bore holes in the soft snow, searching, ever searching. My heart is free, my life is bleak, i howl for an answer, it echoes around the silent woodland. Into your world, your dreaming thoughts, stepping from shadows to quicken your heart with fear. You see me but dont see my beauty, my death mask seizes you and grips you with terror. We are all within nature, yet here i am a loner, an outsider, but this is my lot and i retreat easily behind my cloak of death. The movements i make and the deeds i do, are mine to do as i wish, beacuse i can. Nobody usurps me, black maybe my soul, but beauty and spirit unmatched, will keep me at the top of the food chain. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
 Wonderful write. I feel the oneness with Nature and all life through your words. Love, Margherita |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Margherita...i am honoured by your words...we are all part of nature..and should embrace sprituality, magic and folklore....and dispence with science for a while to get back some of our lost beliefs....bring the mystery and magic back to our lives...science leads to wars.... Goldenrose ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this reminds me of two things...presently the book I'm reading called "Sea Change" and something my uncle once told me, over and over again....don't ever forget where you came from...AND...the minute you become to confident...to sure of yourself...is when that horse is going to throw you off...he trained horses. Outstanding write...proved several great inspirations for me....and you said you aren't a poet?????? I beg to differ, Mr. Smiles |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you LeeJ....it is a new style of poem for me....your words of wisdom and encouragement are very welcome.... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write.. Very much enjoyed the magic! Hugs, Nancy~
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you Nancy...your reply is most welcome...but then magic is your life..right... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
what a captivating opening line...quite remarkable, actually |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
food chain...wow, never thought of it like that |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: And while a carnivore, they take no more than they need, and always make it a clean and decisive death. While some male wolves will always be loners, still the pack can be just that, a family of sisters, brothers, father, mother, all in search of one thing...survival. I enjoyed this, Phil. Thank you. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Nice. Grover. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Steaver..thanks..the opening line is important, it makes the reader want to read more.... Goldenrose. Dixie..wolves are top of the food chain..no animal can better them...they are at the top where they live.... Thank you for your reply.... Goldenrose. Sunshine...Wolves pray on the sick and weak, so it is natural selection....but my poem is ambiguous... Thank you for your words... Goldenrose. Grover...thank you for your reply.. Goldenrose. |
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