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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Sway looking back I remember you need the sound of drama not me I need the whisper of wind the way it tickles palm trees playing softly the tune of the ocean |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Yes! eyes closed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely Helen, are you feeling better? M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! so well said! you know I can relate |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes... give me wind whispers. *S* I like this very much! *S* |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Very nice! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yes Helen, there is not mistaking the soft sound of your whispering. Love it! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh, but that whisper is so dramatic.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
whhiiiisssssshhhhhhhhh |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
i like this very much ! "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
"wind whispers" I do love.  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Let us release from ourselves those who need the sound of drama, Lest they rob us of our peace ~K~ |
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